The Temple of Dagon

Azathoth · Beginner Poster Joined: 09 May 2008 Posts: 11

Hi, I've been working on my first place, and decided to base it around HP Lovecrafts "The Sahdow Over Innsmouth." The place isn't much yet, since I'm only using it to laern building and scripting for now, but you can check it out here Smile

http://www.roblox.com/Item.aspx?ID=1947557

Also, try touching the book in the temple, then watching the house outside Smile

nicholas544 · Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 11:15 pm Post subject:

Its good.
i like the Textures.
i think you should make some tree monsters when you learn how to
xD
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SirGelatina · Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 2:32 am Post subject:

Your place is very good =D
I really loved how did you used the textures. The exploding house was great, too
You have a great potential

Azathoth · Beginner Poster Joined: 09 May 2008 Posts: 11

Thanks

Do you have any suggestions?

Akhenderson · Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 11:58 am Post subject:

well this is a great place with many textures we love. they make things more realistic and gives a little scenery. here are some ideas that you can keep going.

1. make a path way leading to another village or something. and whenever someone touches the book the village is completely destroyed.

2. when the book is touched make it so it kills the person who touched it. i know it isn't much but it will make the person suffer more like a penalty for touching the book

place ideas you could use for your scripting-

1. RPG-your moving characters can make this like an RPG type game

2. Army commando where u control your troops and they fire anyone when u use the shoot button for something like that.

3. GTA type game or something? except without the exploited parts "like the adult parts" where people can move around and you kill them, and then when you kill someone it goes, "you have 1 star" or something. i think you know how GTA works.

well thats all me ideas! Very Happy

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Azathoth · Beginner Poster Joined: 09 May 2008 Posts: 11

Good ideas Smile

I may try some of them sometime.

kiddietron · Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 2:45 pm Post subject:

Potential? You're like clockwork in disguise or something. As a beginner to Roblox you can script 10 times better than the average scripter already. It's a good thing we have you here.

Did you use xLegox's forum post about hidden humanoid properties for your NPCs?
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