AKH Place Reviewer Thread~by : your very own Akhenderson

Akhenderson

Hey this is Akhenderson! and this thread is all about me creating place reviews from the game ROBLOX similar to chess123mate from ROBLOX Direct. I will make a place review everyday that's the most popular on game on ROBLOX during 5:00. That place will get a review on 5 basic things; scripting, display, how fun, originality, and lag.

Thursday: May 15 2008
Place: Drive a Truck, pass the cops if you can
Description: it is not done but iv opened it for now say truck to regen it and have fun and no spawnkilling or team killing for the cops say mines to regen
What it is: Another one of those stupid places that you have to pass in order to win...one of the most common ideas a person could use.
~Ratings~
Scripting: 0/10 there was absolutely no new scripts. Everything was copied. I'm not gonna give the scripts the player used to rate because they are already in the tool box.
Display: 1/10 this had no good design. all there is is a truck, a highway and a house. that's pretty much it...
How fun: 0/10 i don't know how people find this fun. All you do is drive a truck to the end of the road to get to your house.
originality: 1/10 There are already millions of games like this. I have no idea why people go to these common places.
Lag: 8/10 this is probably the only thing good about this place. NO LAG! There maybe the starting lag but thats about it. i don't think this place crashes the computers out of any completely.
overall: 2/10 I don't think this place is worth going to. It's completely boring, people can ruin the fun if there are noobs who come up to you and just team kill you, and you're just driving a truck to the end of a highway...you could do the same thing. actually anyone can. i also should not have rated that much because its so bad.

I hope there is gonna be a better place in the near future.
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SirGelatina · Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 1:56 am Post subject:

Very good and original (Not the place reviewed, but your review)

Akhenderson · Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 10:36 pm Post subject:

Another review
Date: May 16th 2008
Place: RoWar6 Mining Game
Description: A mining game I work on ^^
What it is: Basically another mining game but a little different from them. instead of mining your way through rocks you actually dig the gold from the rocks!
~Ratings~
Scripting: 8/10 Some of these scripts i have yet to see and I just love the Multihandle Script. Though there is no use for the gold yet so it doesnt really cut it yet.
Display: 7/10 This is just what it is, its very well displayed and looks like a mining game and gives you the feeling of one.
How fun: 5/10 This isn't that fun because there is no use in mining the gold yet. It doesnt deserve higher then a 6 until you can actually use the money for items.
Originality: 6/10 There also many games like this but this is the first time you use a drill.
Lag 4/10 It's fairly laggy. Mabye the scripts cause this?
Overall: 7.5/10 Pretty good place i suppose but there could be a few more items in game where they can really change up the game.
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CyberDonkey · Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 5:14 am Post subject:

your first review is 100% true.
what does Robloxian play nowadays?
all they do is drive to the end.
i even noticed some games that
can be told it stinks
from the start just by reading the place
title.
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Akhenderson · Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 10:29 pm Post subject:

instead of the first place being reviewed because i know it will be stupid. i decided to review sirgelatina's WitchCraft Place.

Place: WitchCraft I
Description: Create potions. Battle in a arena. Do everything in the magic world of WitchCraft -= Offering 300 tickets to whoever make a guide for this place for me. Remember: if your guide is VERY good, i will give more than 300 tickets =-
What it is: basically you are a witch learning the arts of witchcraft to use potions and scroll against one another and compete against other players. This may look boring when you have to make potions but when you actually use these potions in combat you will have a blast torturing your opponent.
~Rating~
Scripting: 10/10 I have never seen scripts like these. each potion and scroll each do their jobs and instead of using buttons to buy ingreadients you use the tool supplied for you to buy them.
Display: 9/10 The place looks like a place where people with potions and scrolls unite. I definatly like the lighting being changed as it added a bit more darkness to this dark world of potions. but there are some spelling mistakes in the game so i highly recommend you fix that.
How fun: 9/10 This is definatly one of the funnest places i have ever been in. sad thing is the 1 point was marked off because when you run out of wicks, you cannot play basically. you have to leave and come back or wait a long time for wicks to come to you.
Originality: 10/10 This is basically the first time i have seen a place where you mix in ingredients to make a weapon to use against others.
Lag: 7/10 There is some lag but since the spaces are so small, basically you dont need that much room to walk. only in the arena this place can deal quite a chunk of lag to your computer
Overall: 45/50=9/10 One of the most original, outstanding, well scripted places I have ever seen in ROBLOX history! SirGelatina I hope you keep making these places!
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My INT score was lowered just by
being near those noobs who build
pointless places that instantly get
popular.

SirGelatina · Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 11:52 pm Post subject:

Thank you, ankh. About the spelling mistakes, well, *cough* *cough* My first language is not english -.-

CyberDonkey · Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 8:33 am Post subject:

Well what is it?
you seem confident in this subject.
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SirGelatina · Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 7:52 pm Post subject:

o_O What are you talking about?

ehwhat · Mr. Oozle Joined: 06 Feb 2008 Posts: 52

Nice! Could I get my place reviewed?
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megamaxmax · Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 3:43 pm Post subject:

you would make a great place reveiw i think stuffaboutroblox is still open to jobs
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Aeacus · Site Admin Joined: 05 Feb 2008 Posts: 299 Location: Canada

Nice reviews Smile

And SirGelatina's first language is Portugese Smile

I'd say he is pretty good at English, even had it been his first language.
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kiddietron · Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:28 pm Post subject:

Wow, I couldn't tell at all that SirGelatina wasn't first English, he types better than most I see. Smile

Mind reviewing my place akhenderson? :3
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